Review Comment:
Third Review for EducaWood: a Semantic Web Application for Forestry Education
Review #1
- Reviewer Concern: explaining who identified the requirements (Section 3.1), and how. It would be useful to report whether these are the minimum requirements and, if so, why. Furthermore, as the requirements seem to be a fundamental component of the application development, it would be insightful to include a table mapping the requirements to the ontology elements.
- My Comments on revision: Addressed sufficiently with explicit mapping to respective detailed tables with more info.
- Reviewer Concern: adding, in Sections 2.1 to 2.4, a short paragraph or a few words after the presentation of the related works regarding their comparison with the current work. Also, I would argue that page 5, lines 37-43 do not belong in the related works section.
- My Comments on revision: Addressed. Added new summative paragraph; Restructured the old last paragraph to the respective (Section 3) position.
- Reviewer Concern: splitting Section 3, "Design of EducaWood", into two sections one about the design and data aspects (i.e. "Design of EducaWood"), and one about the usage of the application (i.e. "Usage of EducaWood"). Currently, the two elements are mixed, which hinders the clarity of the manuscript. Additionally, I would appreciate seeing a usage scenario of the application that corresponds to the learning objectives of forestry education of Section 1 page 1, lines 46-49 and page 2, lines 1-5.
- My Comments on revision: Addressed with explicit connection with the previous use case, along with broader details illustrating the functionality, etc
- Reviewer Concern: converting the website footnotes into bibliography items (i.e. @misc), especially the repeated ones.
- My Comments on revision: Addressed. The new version shows them as references now.
- Reviewer Concern: adding more explanation in the Table 1 description in the manuscript regarding the purposes of the chosen domains.
- My Comments on revision: Partially addressed. More details on the specific purpose of the prefix have been added.
- Reviewer Concern: Minor Comments on Presentation (Abbreviations, language use, and styling choice for annotations, etc.)
- My Comments on revision: Addressed
Review #2
- No Concerns from Review 2.
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