Review Comment:
This paper describes a system that enables subject-matter experts (in the particular case considered, people working in the tourism industry) to visually explore linked datasets relating to tourism and economic indicators such as those published by the World Bank, using interactive visualization components that can be put together and linked (coordinated multiple views) to form a full-fledged visualization UI.
The topic addressed is highly relevant and definitely falls in the scope of this special issue. The overall project is interesting, and the paper generally well-written. However, I have several strong reservations about how the work is presented in the paper, and call for major revisions, as detailed below.
The main issue is that the research contribution is not clear. There is no research question clearly formulated, and no validation whatsoever of the proposed system. The fact that this might indeed be "the first visual semantic DSS that uses multidomain knowledge in tourism" does not make this work a _research_ contribution. I do believe there is a research contribution in this project, but the paper needs to be significantly revised and focused on this contribution. Actually, I see two potential contributions: 1) the software architecture and general approach (what the authors call the workflow) to generating interactive visual representations from RDF data cubes; and 2) the elements of the user interface that let users configure the views on the underlying linked data. Unfortunately, those two potentially very interesting contributions are barely discussed, and always at a too-high level of abstraction that does not enable the reader to fully understand (let reproduce) the approach.
Too much space is wasted describing features that are not particularly novel (e.g. coordinated multiple views) and walking the reader through anecdotal examples (Section 6) that do not say anything about the added value of linked data. Most observations made by the hypothetic user in the scenarios could have been made with any visualization system in which the corresponding data coming from the World Bank and other data providers would have been pre-loaded. There is _nothing_ particular about linked data in these examples (given that the data has to be pre-loaded and the system pre-configured for a particular application domain before it can actually be used by subject-matter experts). Thus, there is no validation of the approach. The paper, as it stands now, is little more than an overview description of a system, without enough information to replicate the work. This does not qualify as a research contribution that can be published as a full-length research paper.
The paper has to focus on either or both contributions suggested above (or any other I might have missed, as the authors see fit) and provide some validation of these claimed contributions. This can be performance figures and a discussion of the system's scalability for the software architecture/workflow part (loose claims such as "our solution supports an unlimited number of datasets" without any backing evidence are hardly convincing). For the UI part, it can be a more elaborate scenario that truly illustrates the benefits of having linked data under the hood (as mentioned above this is not the case in the current examples). Or it can be a more elaborate, more strongly rationalized list of user requirements informed by a user-centered design approach (interviews, observational studies, etc.; here again, the "requirements" identified in the paper are fairly loose, and it is very unclear where they come from - who are these "tourism colleagues" and how where they interviewed?). Or even a user study (controlled lab study, longitudinal study, ...) though it is unlikely that the authors have the time to setup such a study within just a few weeks.
What I really miss about the system's UI design is a better understanding of how users can declare new data sources, and how can they navigate cubes/slices/... to create new visualizations and link them with existing ones in the UI.
A few additional comments:
- The paper keeps refering to "Decision support systems". I do not understand what is specific to "decision support" in the approach presented. To me, this system could be used for any visual analysis task (exploratory visualization included), and I do not understand how it is specifically tailored to "decision support" (as opposed to more generally helping users gain insights about their data through visualization, which has applications far beyond "decision support"). Please explain.
- The paper is generally well-written, but there are a few typos, missing words and grammar mistakes scattered throughout the paper.
- p9, "not covered (or really difficult to cover) by traditional database-style systems and where LD technologies could provide a real benefit": this needs to be elaborated upon.
- For a paper about a visualization system, there are very few illustrations, and Section 6 is sometimes hard to follow because of the lack of backing illustrations. It is hard to get a clear impression about the UI and user experience based on this mostly text-based description.
- p13, "By looking at the charts we can also derive new knowledge, this be- ing the main purpose of designing a visual DSS.": but can this knowledge be captured in the tool (through annotations, or input of more statements)?
- Section 6.3 contains a lot of pretty anecdotal observations about the data, that are unlikely to be of much interest to the reader given that, as mentioned earlier, there is nothing specific about the system's interface or linked data (the reported observations made by the hypothetical user could have been made with any decent visualization tool).
- p16, "Our solution integrates data analysis and visualization, but also comes of as a hybrid between multiple view coordinated solutions and LDP, and it can be easily reused or adapted.": the latter part of the sentence is a very loose claim. Please provide evidence about this ease of re-use and adaptation.
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