Review Comment:
In the revised submission the authors have addressed my and the other reviewers’ comments. The paper now includes many more examples better motivating the proposed approach. It also gives many more details about the underlying ontology, the performance evaluation and the user-based experiments.
Some remaining minor points that need to addressed (mostly typos and expression errors) are:
Section 1
- Par.3, line 1: “advancements at” -> “advancements in”
- Par.4, ASSISTON-SE: briefly explain what it is
- Par.6: “by European Network” -> “by the European Network”
- Par.8: “robotics as the oncology” -> “robotics such as the ontology”
- Par.10: Add Section 2 in the paper outline
Section 2
- Par.1: “efforts of European” -> “efforts of the European”
- Par.4, “a rehabilitation robot has Assessment with respect to some evaluation metrics”: explain briefly how these metrics are represented
Section 3
- Par.1: “we have identified”, “we have designed” -> “we identified”, “we designed”
Section 3.1
- Par.5: “on similar mechanism design” -> “on a similar mechanism design”
- Par.5: “as ability” -> “as the ability”
- Q9-Q13: “are evaluated by” -> “are used to evaluate”
Section 3.2
- Par.1: “we have identified”, “we have designed” -> “we identified”, “we designed”
Section 4
- Par.4: “user is able” -> “the user is able”, “user can choose” -> “the user can choose”
- Par.6: “is displayed to user” -> “are displayed to the user”
Section 5.1
- Par.6: “associated by” -> “associated with” (3 occurrences)
Section 5.2
- Par.8: “and then the description” -> “and then with the description”
Section 6
- “SPARQL representation” -> “The SPARQL representation”
Section 7.2
- all verbs in past perfect (e.g. “has been given”) must be replaced with their simple past forms (“was given)
- par.1: “evaluated usefulness” -> “evaluated the usefulness”
Section 8
- Par.2: “propose various approaches” -> “implement various approaches”
- Par.5: “clarification dialogues and learning mechanism” -> “the clarification dialogues and the learning mechanism”
Section 9
- Par.1: “we have introduced” -> “we introduced”
- In your response to the reviewers, you mentioned that you are planning to perform further usability studies. I would suggest you add this in the paragraph describing your plans for future work.
I would also suggest you ask a native English speaker to proofread the paper before submitting the final version.
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