Review Comment:
Thank you for revising and resubmitting your manuscript. The revised version addresses some but not all of my comments:
As mentioned in the previous review, most of the paper is still too verbose and too detailed. The previous version had 14 pages, the new version still has 14 pages (in fact, the main part of the paper is even longer in the new version); in my previous review I had suggested to remove 2-3 pages, which can indeed be safely removed without compromising the key informational aspects of your work, i.e., your core research results. In that regard, I had suggested to concentrate especially (but not only) on Sections 4.1 and 4.2, which are, for what the paper presents, too fine-grained.
I'm still suggesting this since the paper is a straightforward data set/corpus paper, i.e., nearly all of the readers of this article will be familiar with the main approaches followed in this paper. In my previous review I had suggested and I still suggest to remove all the unnecessary detail from the paper that does not directly relate to your core research results (see the examples I provided in the previous review and the suggestions included in the PDF file that I will send to the editors).
Figure 1 and Figure 2 still seem to be screenshots. I suggested to recreate these in LaTeX to improve the quality of the figures (this would also enable copying and pasting the content of these two figures from the paper). This comment also relates to some of the other figures.
Figure 3: I suggested to include this graphics not as a bitmap but as a vectorised PDF or SVG file so that the quality is improved. This still needs to be done.
There are still various overfull boxes that need to be fixed.
As mentioned, an annotated PDF version of the paper is attached, which includes additional remarks and especially many suggestions for content to remove from the paper.
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