Review Comment:
This paper focuses on the topic of Knowledge Graph (KG) construction in the manufacturing domain. In particular, the focus is on neuro-symbolic AI techniques. The research method used is that of a systematic literature review. The research is quite well executed and leads to interesting results. For publication, the paper should be improved in the following main areas:
(1) The study methods description should be revised by clarifying the rationale behind choosing the research questions, as well as some of the design choices (see detailed comments).
(2) Additional background knowledge should be added for the readers to understand all aspects of the paper, especially related to the AI system patters.
(3) In the sections describing the results, several figures miss a description of what they depict and/or an interpretation of the information they show. There are also inconsistencies between the numbers in the text and their counterparts on the figures. Some parts remain abstract and could be extended with examples.
(4) The discussion/conclusion sections do not revisit the RQs and as such they feel rather disconnected from the main part of the paper. This part should be re-written to capture the main conclusions along the RQs that the study investigated.
Detailed comments:
* What was the rationale behind deriving the fours RQs in Sect 3.1.1? Why are these the most important? Why does it make sense to investigate these and not other RQs?
* For the survey methodology: please clarify whether both primary and secondary studies (i.e. surveys) were included.
* The letter "I" is used to identify both inclusion criteria (Table 3) and the extracted data items (Table 5). This can lead to confusion and therefore the data items could be referred to with another letter than "I" (e.g., "D").
* "Balancing the large number of parameters of BERT, ALBERT is employed in three publications, as shown in Figure 8a." => please include more clarifications, as it is not clear how this statement can be deduced from Figure 8a.
* "We show the number of combinations of common building blocks of NER methods in Figure 8b." => please expand this sentence to describe what exactly is shown in Figure 8b. Additionally, please also provide an interpretation of the shown data.
* Sect. 4.3.4, paragraph starting on L3 makes a number of strong claims about joint knowledge extraction, which are not supported by relevant related work. Please include such support from literature as support for these claims.
* Section 4.4. assumes quite some background knowledge from the reader in terms of what are the I, Y, T patterns (p21/L5) as well as what d-M-s and d-K-s stand for. It would be advisable to provide some succinct material to explain the meaning of these notations.
* Fig.12 - please explain what the figure depicts exactly and provide an interpretation thereof.
* Sect. 4.5 => the last paragraph remains very abstract, mentioning "Innovative models, methods, frameworks" but does not give any examples thereof. Including some examples would make the text much more interesting.
* "4.6. Fairly Provisioning" => does fairly refer for FAIR? Please clarify and if yes, use FAIR instead.
* It is commendable that the results of the SLR are published as a KG. Did the authors consider ORKG as a publication space for their results? This would give their work a much higher visibility.
Further/minor comments:
* abstract: The main research question "Which role play neuro-symbolic AI approaches in knowledge graph construction for Manufacturing?" should be rephrased to "Which role do neuro-symbolic AI approaches play in knowledge graph construction for manufacturing?"
* p2/l3: "To work with KGs, they first must be constructed." - consider removing, as this states the obvious.
* p3: Fig1 should be explained in more detail in the text of the paper.
* Section 2: there is no need to reproduce the title of the discussed papers, it is sufficient if the references are added
* p4/l40 - "show a clear overview" => "show an overview"
* p5/l12 - "which is reasonable for the reviewed time period" - it si not clear how this statement was derived. Please consider adding an explanation of this statement
* p5/table 1 - please clarify what do X, (X) and - mean. Are they similar in semantics with the full/half/empty circle used in the MD column? If not, how do they differ? If yes, can the notation be unified?
* p5/l42 design patterns" representing "statistical ..." => design patterns" representing the combined use of "statistical ..."
* p6/l16 DT acronym needs definition
* p7/l28 3.1.3 => Section 3.1.3
* p12/l20 conduction => execution?
* p13/l47 "further stages 5" => "further 5 stages"
* p15/l17-18; "79% of the cases applied on unstructured text" => actually, in Fig 6, this is 60%
* p17/l39 "binary relations are relevant in our final search corpus" => please clarify why this is the case.
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